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New World
You wished for a new world
But only ruled by fear; your
Dream is doomed to shatter
In the twilight to then disappear
Nevertheless I warned you
Didn't I dear Raito-kun?
That Kira's deeds were evil
That Justice would have won
Yet back then only the rain
Was listening to my prayer
While you were playing God
With Misa as your Archangel
I really hate to admit it
But I lost to you at that time
Yet I'm still here watching
You running from your life
My murder, my enemy
My first and only friend
Your turn’s come to pay
Justice will prevail again
… But don’t be afraid…
Even the void will end someday
You wished for a new world
But only ruled by fear; your
Dream is doomed to shatter
In the twilight to then disappear
Nevertheless I warned you
Didn't I dear Raito-kun?
That Kira's deeds were evil
That Justice would have won
Yet back then only the rain
Was listening to my prayer
While you were playing God
With Misa as your Archangel
I really hate to admit it
But I lost to you at that time
Yet I'm still here watching
You running from your life
My murder, my enemy
My first and only friend
Your turn’s come to pay
Justice will prevail again
… But don’t be afraid…
Even the void will end someday
Literature
Broken hearts and Bloody wrists
Ribbons in her hair and scars beneath her sleeves
Her soul is slowly dying as tormentors turn to thieves
The mask on her face doesn't cover her eyes
So she can't cover her sorrow with her lies
She's so beautiful
It's breathtaking
She's so sorrowful
It's heartbreaking
Trace your veins with this blade,
Still the fiery flames of hate
Your pleasures pain, a steel caress,
You hide your hurt, shield your distress
She's so beautiful
It's breathtaking
She's so sorrowful
It's heartbreaking
When comes the time for pain to end?
Until that day your heart descends
Your soul gives up, your life decays
You'll find no cause to change y
Literature
Cuts
Dyke.
Fag.
Queer.
Words I've come to know as name.
They jeer and they push and they taunt.
I give them no tears, no blood, no hurt.
I remain as sturdy as stone.
Underneath I am crumbling.
Do they know each word is a cut?
A mentally inflicted wound?
With every sharp letter,
I am left with another hurt to heal.
What does it matter?
Why should I care?
Their ignorance should not bother me.
But it does and it will, forever.
I am still a person.
Still worth the attention and voice of any other.
But they don't care.
I'm worthless, useless, beneath them.
I'm gay.
Literature
Cheap and Tawdry Married Love
My mother cried when I married you.
Twisted up her brothel-keeper's mouth
and bawled-
'That girl's gone and sold herself too cheap.
...And after everything I told her!'
My aunt patted her hand
Slyly reminding her how bad the deal was,
Your poor job-prospects,
The tiny diamond on the ring
Your mother had given us
Because you couldn't afford to buy one.
I paid them no heed.
Smiling, I posed for the photos
Thankful I'd escaped.
Do you see me?
Standing there beside you
In your sharp suit and your Fagin smile.
I was innocent then,
I couldn't see the flames
But I could still burn...
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VERSIONE ITALIANA
Nuovo Mondo
Desideravi un nuovo mondo
Ma col terrore l’hai governato
Il tuo sogno è destinato ad infrangersi
E a sparire nella luce del tramonto
Nonostante ti avessi avvertito
Non è vero, caro Raito-kun?
Che le azioni di Kira erano malvagie
Che la giustizia avrebbe trionfato
Ma a quel tempo solo la pioggia
Ascoltava la mia preghiera
Mentre tu giocavi a fare Dio
E Misa il tuo Arcangelo era
Odio veramente ammetterlo
Eppure io perdetti allora
Però ti sto ancora osservando
Mentre fuggi dalla tua stessa vita
Mio assassino, mia nemesi
Mio primo e solo amico
Di pagare il tempo è giunto
La giustizia prevarrà di nuovo
… Ma non aver timore…
Un giorno anche il nulla avrà fine
[Death Note] Silence (poetry)
Silence
Earlier you stood alone,
Cold rain pouring down;
You didn’t care but smiled and joked,
Talked about bells and lies.
Black hair, white shirt, blue jeans
Justice was your game;
But I knew you wanted more,
I could see it in your eyes.
Family and friends, a kiss from a girl,
A normal life you yearned for;
But your haunted (and haunting) gaze
Was not normal at all.
Your manners too were weird,
Tea and sweets all you ate,
Yet without almost sleeping
You lived, fought and played.
More peculiar, the way you sat:
Knees folded under your chin
The chair was like a throne and
Your world data on a screen.
Between your lips, a finger,
Pale skin and messy hair;
You were someway handsome,
I wouldn’t have called you kind.
Your Justice was steel-like,
We had so much in common:
Haters of defeat, mind-games lovers,
Though different dreams we sought.
You fell under my laws today
And I watched you die;
This is my day of glory:
I smirked, I screamed, I cried.
I crushed you Ryuuzaki,
[Death Note] New World (poetry)
New World
You wished for a new world
But only ruled by fear; your
Dream is doomed to shatter
In the twilight to then disappear
Nevertheless I warned you
Didn't I dear Raito-kun?
That Kira's deeds were evil
That Justice would have won
Yet back then only the rain
Was listening to my prayer
While you were playing God
With Misa as your Archangel
I really hate to admit it
But I lost to you at that time
Yet I'm still here watching
You running from your life
My murder, my enemy
My first and only friend
Your turn’s come to pay
Justice will prevail again
… But don’t be afraid…
Even the void will end someday
[Death Note] Angel's Song (poetry)
Angel’s Song
Please be careful
God is watching over you
Never let go of my hand
While you walk on the darkest of streets
Even if you're alone, even if you're far away
He will always find you
He knows the same things that I know
Things I don't even remember anymore
But I wonder just one thing:
What will He do if I die?
Even if you're alone, even if you're far away
He will always find you
He saved me from the emptiness
When I saw His just hand
Reaching out to me from the light
With Kira, I learned to fly
Even if you're alone, even if you're far away
He will always find you
[Death Note] DN anime analysis
Death Note – analysis of the animated series
The lack of values, the pressure of the society on the Japanese youth, the searching for the real justice, the boredom, the necessity to find a purpose for our own existence… if I would like to sum Death Note up in few words, I would write that it contains all these themes and expresses them in a really original way.
But this awesome animated adaptation of Takeshi Obata and Tsugumi Ohba's manga (the second name is a pseudonymous of the story writer, who wishes to remain anonymous) deserves a deeper analysis for sure.
Death Note manages to convey values without being banal; it manages to make you laugh, cry, arrive to the point of throwing the first object one can pose their hands on to the screen for the anger (or so it was for me).
This analysis contains heavy spoilers so I advice you to only read it if you've already completed the vision of the anime, and it contains my personal interpretation of some elements of the serie
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VERSIONE ITALIANA
Nuovo Mondo
Desideravi un nuovo mondo
Ma col terrore l’hai governato
Il tuo sogno è destinato ad infrangersi
E a sparire nella luce del tramonto
Nonostante ti avessi avvertito
Non è vero, caro Raito-kun?
Che le azioni di Kira erano malvagie
Che la giustizia avrebbe trionfato
Ma a quel tempo solo la pioggia
Ascoltava la mia preghiera
Mentre tu giocavi a fare Dio
E Misa il tuo Arcangelo era
Odio veramente ammetterlo
Eppure io perdetti allora
Però ti sto ancora osservando
Mentre fuggi dalla tua stessa vita
Mio assassino, mia nemesi
Mio primo e solo amico
Di pagare il tempo è giunto
La giustizia prevarrà di nuovo
… Ma non aver timore…
Un giorno anche il nulla avrà fine
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It's good, I like your writing. Now to be fair, I don't really like poetry based on a previously written story. But I do like the style that you have done, do you have any poems with your own stories or meanings? I think you have the potential for that.